November 02 2011
Cryptic Court 2
All rise – the Cryptic Court is in session, a tribunal to accuse the latest clue-gang of pushing the boundaries of nicety. On presenting each of the impeached, I shall read the charges levelled at the creation, leaving you [the jury] to voice your own verdict.
(And just to prove your mettle, can you conjure up less scurrilous clues for the same words?)
Upset Noriega has no time for press = IRON [Yesterday’s Brummie tries this reductive anagram, where the solver must intuitively remove AGE from NORIEGA – versus EON say – to make IRON. Too sloppy by half.]
Head of salon put rollers in baskets for the juniors = SHAMPOOERS [Getting past the flaky answer, with a loose definition bolstered only by context, are we happy with roller translating as the letter, O? Arachne’s fate hangs by a thread.]
Quietly tell drunk to say when I depart = SOTTO VOCE [Given that the Italian phrase means ‘under the voice’, what say the jurors to Bonxie using VOICE minus I = VOCE?]
Part of dream about big bird with butter not melting in mouth? = DEMURE [Aside from the kooky surface sense, this clue from Araucaria is telling us that part of a dream is DRE. Combined, these tow misdemeanours see the eminence grise in the dock.]
Lodge your own verdict – and alternative clues – before the gavel falls.
Comments
RobT — 02 November at 09:40AM
SHAMPOOERS: Dirt-throwers swallow their own medicine
DA — 02 November at 09:42AM
Racy wordplay RobT - but where's thou definition, brother?
Mr X — 02 November at 09:43AM
I thought 1 was OK as it's not an anagram but a reversal
The others are all a bit dodgy with Araucaria's being the one part of his work that I sometimes take issue with - using "part of" or similar to signify an unspecified number of letters from a word.
DA — 02 November at 10:14AM
True, X - and if we view 'upset' as reversal, and not anagram, then AGE (and IRON) are both there to be seen. Surface sense is also sound. And notbaly, this was a Down clue.
I'm thinking Brummie is exonerated. No charges to answer. The rest?
RobT — 02 November at 10:17AM
Sorry...still in Melbourne Cup mode:
SHAMPOOERS: Dirt-throwers take their own filth to the cleaners
DA — 02 November at 10:20AM
Bingo. A beauty.
RobT — 02 November at 10:27AM
IRON: Stick in or out?
RK — 02 November at 10:30AM
I quite like No. 2. I think it all works in context, it's amusing, and what's wrong with the occasional flakiness? (Which, by the way, ties in nicely with the theme.)
Agree that No. 1 is fine as it's a reversal. Its only crime is being too easy, but the surface is great.
No. 3 gets a no vote from me. Voce and voice - same thing in my book.
And No. 4 is just downright weird. Agree that 'part of' doesn't cut it.
RobT — 02 November at 10:31AM
SOTTO VOCE: 'Toots' and cove intertwining in whispered tones.
RobT — 02 November at 10:33AM
DEMURE: Me? Rude? Au contraire.
RobT — 02 November at 10:38AM
1. I don't like it at all because it should indicate reversal then removal of 'age'. As it is you can't tell. (B-)
2. I have no idea what a junior has to do with a shampooer. Ironically, clear as mud. (C+)
3. Yes a bit loose (I hate it when the root of an answer is used in the clue) but I don't loudly mind given it's in a different language. (B-)
4. Slack. He should be ashamed and should be made to do penance if he were Catholic. (C+)
Geoff Bailey — 02 November at 10:45AM
I'm happy with the first if it's a down clue; that was my thought when I read it (with the answer accompanying, granted, so I didn't have to think about it), and I'm pleased to see it confirmed. As an across clue it would be rightly panned.
For the rest, class me with RobT, although without the hate.
Anthony Douglas — 02 November at 11:01AM
Hey, I'll go out on a limb and say I think 1 is a perfectly fine clue. The surface reading is impeccable, and as a down clue, I see no problem. Upset can be up-set, or upset - it's an indicator that works in different ways, and I'm sure there are other words in that category.
Rollers takes a bit of work. I assumed it was a reference to wheels, in which case, I believe that's been done before. The dodgiest part is the definition - but if it's a themed puzzle, you've got to expect that. Pass.
3 - it's a different language, and the clue uses verb rather than noun form. If we're going to complain about uses of other languages giving away chunks of the answer, there's a whole can of worms, French articles and so on to deal with. I'd pass this one too.
4 - It must have been close to his deadline. That being said, he supplies the fodder in the clue, so it's not an unlimited set of possibilities. It might be unorthodox, but it's not unfair.
AS — 02 November at 12:02PM
I reckon 1, 2 and 4 suck because they break cryptic crossword conventions; 3 sucks just because it sucks.
Iron: Roll roll roll (4)
RobT — 02 November at 03:12PM
IRON: Club sandwich
SHAMPOOERS: Homer soaps combover with washers.
Boniface — 02 November at 03:38PM
For me, 1 is fine but the rest are not.
2's def is far too loose, even given the context. 5 lashes.
Apart from the dodgy use of VOICE, 3 is grammatically incorrect IMO (it should be "...I departs" but then that ruins the surface reading). 10 lashes.
4 is just plain lazy with a surface reading straight out of Dr Seuss. 5 lashes.
Jeez I'm glad that some of my clues aren't hauled before the Cryptic Court...
DA — 03 November at 09:08AM
The peepz of Cryptopia have spoken.
Clue 1 sees Brummie exonerated. (With only an AS hiss)
Clue 2 affords Arachne a stint of community service in Lola's Salon.
Clue 3 gives Bonxie a week's detention in an echo chamber.
Clue 4 puts Araucaria under house arrest for 10 days, where he'll need to buy his butter online.
SK — 06 November at 05:01PM
IRON: Press Club