May 24 2011
Ghan Busters
As winter edges nearer, scores of tourists will be taking The Ghan up the guts, the train to link Adelaide to Darwin. To help idle the long, red hours, we’ve been asked to compose clues for the five main stops: Port Augusta, Coober Pedy, Kulgera, Alice Springs & Katherine. Two clues in fact: one for each class of passenger – the VIP fare, and the GP, or General Public.
In short, this week is a two-tier challenge – to make two elegant clues for each of the five stops – one for the seasoned solver, and one for the plucky rookie. Two levels of difficulty, if you like – a one-star and five-star. Here’s my shot at Katherine:
KA – VIP: Endless swimmers in stock
KA – GP: Break in the rake
Feel free to offer the clues as they occur to you – in GP or VIP order, paired for one answer, or in dribs and drabs. So long as you classify the inkling, using the railroad code for the five stations: PA, CP, KU, AS and KA, along with the class identifier of VIP or GP.
Come deadline by late Thursday, if we can all file our ten clues from south to north, with both clue levels attached to each stop. As in my sample, there’s no need to include a defintion – though you may if it suits your wordplay.
Note for Rookie Stormers: if you’re pretty new to this cryptic biz, though you know the basics, then feel free to submit five GP clues only – though making a good ‘easy’ clue is not always easy on paper. But here’s a good Storm to take a crack.
Hamper loaded? Camera charged? Hip flask smuggled? Let’s get this Storm on track.
Comments
SK — 24 May at 09:51AM
CP-GP: Detonate decoy probe
SK — 24 May at 09:55AM
PA-GP(?): Harbour-master's home
SK — 24 May at 10:00AM
Maybe that should be-
PA-VIP: Harbourmaster's home
DC — 24 May at 10:05AM
I wonder if I could get away with this bit of misdirection
AS VIP: Spooner's pursuer sprays on tan (thanklessly)
I suspect not since it relies on some literary speculation.
SK — 24 May at 10:09AM
AS-GP: Exchange special rings
DA — 24 May at 10:17AM
DC, SK - and all players: imagine the GP is tyro level, more about anagrams, clear containers and luminous signposts. In short, classy but lucid, with no giant leaps required.
While VIP is the elite level, a-la a standard Storm to be honest, where we camouflaged the capitals with such flair.
The Storm was sparked by recent chats about making simpler cryptic clues, which I wished to show can be no less simple to conjure:
http://davidastle.com/blog/post/crossword-world/
DC — 24 May at 10:23AM
AS-VIP: Nevil liked town?
This was originally a GP, but I moved it up a category.
DC — 24 May at 10:39AM
AS-GP: Leaps after Cooper?
KA-GP: Hepburn is not in state
RK — 24 May at 10:51AM
KA-GP: Take in her landscape
Nib — 24 May at 11:06AM
PA (VIP) - Wine grape?
DC — 24 May at 11:09AM
PA-GP: Left lordly airhead
RK — 24 May at 11:31AM
KU-GP: King introduced a gruel mixture
DC — 24 May at 11:51AM
CP-VIP: Chop crop hop top cop shop eavesdrop
Nib — 24 May at 11:52AM
AS (GP) - Slashed sale pricings
AS (GP) - Spun spear slicing
The opal capital of the world:
CP- (GP) Evenly scoop orb pearl, pie idly.
KU (GP) - Earplug adjusted, King takes Pawn?
AS (GP) - Church lost chalice from vaults?
KA (GP?) - Knucklehead heartbroken pining Echo.
[Narcissistic allusion there. The 'in' in pining echoes, to get the in and the E, so... yeah, this one's a mess. First half should be more than sufficient.]
AK — 24 May at 12:09PM
I realize DC's already kind of done this:
AS-GP: How she gets out of Wonderland?
KA-GP: Kat, loveless heroine
PA-GP: Old Tawny at serious art opening
RK — 24 May at 12:12PM
AS-GP: Bounds after girl in the looking-glass
AK — 24 May at 12:20PM
CP-VIP?: Called out, gassy perhaps, just a second away from disaster
Not sure if this one's difficult enough for VIP.
RK — 24 May at 12:49PM
PA-GP: Ship's left a month beside a South Australian city
RK — 24 May at 01:23PM
CP-GP: Company body peer organised
SK — 24 May at 01:53PM
K-GP: Gawk at her inedible portion
This GP clueing is harder than it looks. I blame DA....he has twisted and contorted our brains to such an extent that we can no longer function properly...
DA — 24 May at 01:57PM
Does us all good, SK. I hereby promise to submit my 5 GPs post-deadline, just to undergo the same salutary torment.
SK — 24 May at 02:04PM
DA, if I ever see you compiling for the Women's Weekly ctyptic (if there is still such a thing) I will know that this experiment has sent you too far the other way.
PA-GP: Wave to a past guru
SK — 24 May at 02:22PM
KU-GP: Every leader knows:- ultra luxurious Ghan extends regional Australia
RK — 24 May at 02:34PM
Yes, I'm finding the GPs are definitely harder to clue. That's why I've got mine out of the way early, and now I have the remaining time to enjoy crafting the VIPs.
JD — 24 May at 02:41PM
KA GP: Roundabout near Keith.
SK — 24 May at 02:41PM
Ditto RK. Just gotta get the brain back into twisted mode...
An in-betweener (for the moment)
AS-VIPish: Special elastic bands
DC — 24 May at 03:03PM
KU-VIP: Cherry-pick radio outrage
PA-VIP: Herald's outright fabrication, to trap outliers
DC — 24 May at 03:27PM
KU-GP: Contents of skull starts gelling with age
SK — 24 May at 03:51PM
Relevant for the location-
CP-VIP: Manage around operating bore and dry extremes
SK — 24 May at 04:04PM
A whole clue-
KU-VIP: Uncommon address to king; "You regal jerk"
SK — 24 May at 04:33PM
AS-VIP: Heads of police squad arrest Mob after Capone murders
DC — 24 May at 04:44PM
CP-GP: Coped with sober, directionless youth leader
I can't help thinking that 'level-headed' would read much better than 'directionless', but leveling the head is a bit of a stretch for GP.
DC — 24 May at 05:13PM
KA-VIP: Katy and Cher (9¾)
SK — 24 May at 05:27PM
KA-VIP: She's famous for being gorgeous?
dg — 24 May at 06:52PM
PA-GP: Left a month in the middle.
SK — 24 May at 06:56PM
KA-GP: Look at her in extraordinary territory?
One Wheel — 24 May at 06:56PM
PA - GP - Left goldrush, middle-class
One Wheel — 24 May at 07:00PM
KU - GP - Slicing pears or bananas
SK — 24 May at 07:03PM
PA-GP: Guru sat atop rock
One Wheel — 24 May at 07:04PM
Sorry, that was supposed to be AS.
dg — 24 May at 07:08PM
AS-GP: A pest appears suddenly
One Wheel — 24 May at 07:37PM
AS - GP - Cairns pile about first Ghan stop
KA - GP - Some break at her in every way
KU - GP - OK, duologues read evenly
JD — 24 May at 08:18PM
AS-GP Brady maid bounds.
One Wheel — 24 May at 08:23PM
CP - GP - Company award preordered sweet body
SK — 24 May at 08:45PM
CP-VIP: Drill bore into weathered rocky stump
KU-GP: Regular beating when exchanging rook for king
KU-GP: First of all, knowing ultra luxurious Ghan exhibits regional Australia
SK — 24 May at 09:23PM
AS-GP: Produce replica signs
DA — 24 May at 09:52PM
Welcome to the groove, One Wheel - and good to see dg aboard too. Some cute n curly ones already registered. Another tricksy field to filter, but that's the fun of the trip.
Just a pity Oodnadatta isn't on the Ghan line...
SK — 24 May at 10:07PM
OO-GP: Dodgy data on toad
OO-VIPish: Retro display of matt ad and oodles of input
OO-VIP: Whose aliens were heard to chat about cruxiverbalist?
SK — 24 May at 10:18PM
...sorry, but did I spell that wrong? (crux or cruc?)
And the second one should have been "...and oodles of material". Not that it matters...
RV — 24 May at 11:04PM
PA-GP: Danish director in a Trop retrospective.
LR — 24 May at 11:28PM
PA-GP - Unexpected stop at Ugaru?
(I just invented the town of Ugaru - but it could totally be a Ghan stop, don't you think?)
Boniface — 24 May at 11:30PM
Sorry for any double-ups, got to this quite late.
PA - GP: Grandfather, for one, revered a South Australian whistlestop?
PA - VIP: Shakespearean heroine, noble instead of ingenuous, initially
CP - GP: Pigeon noise: dry beep, perhaps
CP - VIP: Shy about awkward probe by journalist
KU - GP: Skull skinned with unsteady gear
KU - VIP: Sweet potato, large instead of medium
AS - GP: Malevolent intention won't initiate wells in the outback
AS - VIP: Snake admitting nuisance calls
KA - GP: Strip down, freak at her inexperience
KA - VIP: Man venturing into Tarkine wilderness
DC — 24 May at 11:32PM
I have been beaten to the aliens (Ood have thought it?)
RV — 24 May at 11:43PM
PA-VIP: Heard to use past argot awkwardly.
Mauve — 24 May at 11:47PM
DC: not these aliens I hope - have to check...
AS: Weird space-girls in outback town!
Mauve — 25 May at 12:03AM
KA: Princess nearly gets her fine head decapitated
JD — 25 May at 07:28AM
CP-GP: Detonate! Proceed, Boy!
JD — 25 May at 08:01AM
PA-GP: Carry Master's course.
JD — 25 May at 08:03AM
I should realise by now that if I have a good idea, chances are someone else has had it before me. I should take the time to read all the previous entries thoroughly first.
DA — 25 May at 08:45AM
That's the catch JD. Latecomers have to find fresh tacks, but that can be a blessing too.
Mind you, the danger of SK's Harbourmasters (for Port Augusta) is that port = harbour in both instances, what Puzzled calls the Hookworm Syndrome, where a single meaning is falsely parading as a double.
Nonetheless, SK's meld is good enough to offset that intrinsic flaw. (Sort of musings a clue-judge needs to make....)
JD — 25 May at 08:45AM
KU-GP: Broken Ark? Glue it.
SK — 25 May at 09:41AM
My copy of Puzzled is out on loan DA, so could you please remind me about the Hookworm Syndrome wrt my PA clue? I thought it to be a fairly straight-forward construction (Port = HARBOUR, Augusta = MASTERS HOME). What am I missing?
DC — 25 May at 09:50AM
My 10, with a coat of polish.
PA-VIP: Herald's outright fabrication, to trap outliers
PA-GP: Left lordly airhead
CP-VIP: Chop chop, hop top, cop shop, eavesdrop
CP-GP: Cooped with sober (but so gone) youth leader
KU-VIP: Cherry-pick radio outrage
KU-GP: Contents of skull start gelling with age
AS-VIP: Spooner's pursuer sprays on tan, thanklessly
AS-GP: Shute liked town
KA-VIP: Middleton and heir on 9¾
KA-GP: Hepburn isn't lying in state
DA — 25 May at 09:53AM
Don't get me wrong, SK - it's an exquisite construction, with one slight snag. The word port, as in Port Augusta, means harbour, hence that fragment of the wordplay is an orthodox definition.
Hookworm Syndrome came about due to an undergrad clue I composed:
Parasite to catch bait = hookworm
Here you could argue that both hook & worm are mirroring the same purpose they fulfil in the answer. Not a good habit to nurture in the business of deception and misdirection.
(Though due to the class of your Harbourmaster dovetail this concern is largely erased.)
SK — 25 May at 10:00AM
Ahh yes, now I remember. Thanks for the reality check.....must admit that, given we are only clueing wordplay here, I didn't even think about the definition application.
Mauve — 25 May at 10:42AM
Getting ideas down first, then will allocate the VIP/GP
PA: Left gold rush with a settlement
RK — 25 May at 10:45AM
KA-VIP: Two cards - neither wild
Mauve — 25 May at 10:46AM
er, whoops, sorry One Wheel. I didn't see yours. I now sympathise with JD.
RK — 25 May at 11:29AM
PA-VIP: University went after Op Art designed by Klimt's predecessor, mostly.
or
PA-VIP: Art opus composed has no bearing prior to Mahler and Holst, in the main.
Both very wordy, I know. And they don't even contain a definition!
AK — 25 May at 11:53AM
Here's my final list! I hope I haven't stepped on anyone's toes.
AS-GP: How she gets out of Wonderland?
AS-VIP: A license, with no expiry, to hang about pious ones
KA-GP: Kat, loveless heroine
KA-VIP (full clue for poetic justice): A thousand went back in, in there, a place in the middle of nowhere
PA-GP: Old Tawny at solemn art opening
PA-VIP: For Spanish tiara crown: gold, top gold, gold folded over around holy man
CP-GP: This mining town is whack, per boy code!
CP-VIP: Called out, gassy perhaps, a second away from disaster
KU-GP: Shouted, "Exterminate!" teeming with rage
KU-VIP: A small/medium, Luke lost his footing and went head over heels
dg — 25 May at 12:11PM
K-GP: A female heir taken inhumanely.
CP-GP: Half-cooked berry pie - dry without the middle bits.
CP-VIP: Breakthrough treatment for baby, previously tense and crying?
RV — 25 May at 12:15PM
CP-GP: Firm obeyed order, embracing PR spin.
CP-VIP: Sunless cops obey underground.
SK — 25 May at 12:38PM
Clue for a bizarre location-
CP-VIP: Hack bore-living in weather with daily extremes
And I know it's not in the comp, but DA's OODNADATTA made me think of the sneaky little James Bond clueing for "OO" in last week's cryptic-
OO-VIP: Certified killer genes (facts about model)
PRS — 25 May at 01:03PM
AS GP: Not where breaking glaciers spin.
AS GP: Sales pricing might be higher here.
AS GP: Supper here maybe a single crisp.
PRS — 25 May at 01:09PM
PA GP: Wherein to support August activities.
KA VIP: A middle-heavyweight who rose up.
SK — 25 May at 01:38PM
KU-GP: Everyone's heading to Katherine (ultimately); luxurious Ghan exhibits remote Australia
RV — 25 May at 02:33PM
KU-GP: Shot AK with Luger.
DC — 25 May at 02:42PM
I see the competition is hotting up.
IC — 25 May at 04:19PM
Very late to join in this one. And struggling to differentiate between VIP clues & GP clues. For what it's worth here are 5 from me...
PA - VIP: Fremantle Doctor in Spain for treating airheads?
CP - GP: School building program embraced by imprisoned youth leaders
KU - GP: Evil twins can't stop swallowing crazy glue
AS - GP: Calls past a dole office in party gear
KA - VIP?: Citizen protects the State
SK — 25 May at 05:08PM
Here's my lot-
PA-GP: Guru sits atop rock
PA-VIP: Harbourmaster's home?
CP-GP: Detonate decoy probe
CP-VIP: Hack bore-living in weather with daily extremes
KU-GP: All heading to Katherine (ultimately); luxurious Ghan exhibiting remote Australia
KU-VIP: Territorial address to king; "You regal jerk!"
AS-GP: Reproduce replica signs
(I really wanted to submit "Special elastic bands" here, but I suspect it is neither first class nor coach)
AS-VIP: Mob arrest by police squad chiefs after Capone murders
KA-GP: Look at her in epic territory
KA-VIP: She's famous for being gorgeous?
SK — 25 May at 05:20PM
Sorry, that first one should be-
PA-GP: Guru sat atop rock
RV — 25 May at 05:23PM
IC, I was heading that way myself on KU. I hope you don't mind if I go with glue as well.
KU-GP: Ark glue came unstuck
KU-VIP: Without hesitation PNG bird changed gear.
SK — 25 May at 05:26PM
Arghh...should have checked my list. Last tweak (I promise)
KA-VIP: She's famous for being gorgeous and territorial?!
DC — 25 May at 06:05PM
RV's luger clue makes me think a good competition one week would be to use our own initials to clue something or other; just like the occasional DA worms its way into Friday crosswords.
Say the category was Australian cities:
Losing head start, I'm eaten by voodoo spirit. Eaten by spirit! (4,5)
Alternately, we can use other solver's initials like some sort of trash-talking rap contest...
(I suspect the AK in question referred to the assault rifle, but y'know.)
SK — 25 May at 08:13PM
Nice idea DC. Time to play the man/woman, not the ball. I always suspected Gymbunnies were created by men using hash...
Speaking of hash, as I made one of my earlier list, here's a clean copy so the judges don't need to cut 'n paste. No more changes...promise.
PA-GP: Guru sat atop rock
PA-VIP: Harbourmaster's home?
CP-GP: Detonate decoy probe
CP-VIP: Hack bore-living in weather with daily extremes
KU-GP: All starters for Katherine (ultimately); luxurious Ghan exhibiting remote Australia
KU-VIP: Isolated address to king: "You regal jerk!" (with apologies to the good people of Kulgera)
AS-GP: Reproduce replica signs
(I really wanted to submit "Special elastic bands" here, but I suspect it is neither first class nor coach)
AS-VIP: Mob arrest by police squad chiefs after Capone murders
KA-GP: Look at her in epic territory
KA-VIP: She's famous for being gorgeous, but territorial?
RV — 25 May at 10:50PM
AS-GP: Pissing clear fluid.
RV — 25 May at 11:26PM
AS-GP: Ali G's penetrated by queer princes. (Please accept my apologies if this offends. I couldn't resist writing it).
AS-VIP: (with acknowledgement of SK's offering at 10.09am yesterday, which I love) Special outcalls.
dg — 25 May at 11:31PM
KU-VIP: Bump in the night returned without introducing bad dreams.
dg — 25 May at 11:57PM
KU-GP: Lastly, thank you all solving here for Australia.
dg — 26 May at 12:34AM
KA-VIP: Real-life location of Emerald City and Emerald Isle found in article?
RK — 26 May at 07:39AM
AS-VIP: South Park gang son follows, a cause of head scratching?
AK — 26 May at 08:09AM
DC: I'll consider the AK reference an affrontery until otherwise qualified. :P
I do like the idea of cryptic rap battles, though.
e.g. DC, in Washington, is confused without women, but his chivalry towards them is evidently dimmin'? (3)
RK — 26 May at 08:42AM
CP-VIP: Corby, busted with drug (dope), devastated
I wanted to put this:
Corby busted with drug, illicit dope
but am uncertain as to whether 'illicit' would be acceptable as an anagrind.
AK — 26 May at 08:52AM
RK: I like trying to fit trafficking in there somewhere.
Corby busted with drug - dope trafficking
AK — 26 May at 08:53AM
Not to say that it's not already a fantastic construction.
RK — 26 May at 08:57AM
Thanks AK. Hopefully not too controversial.
KU-VIP: Vessel tossed back over swell, losing bulkhead
SK — 26 May at 09:27AM
RK that Corby idea is brilliant. As is RV's bladder problem....let's see if it passes the poor taste filter!
— 26 May at 10:30AM
I don't actually mean anything by this trash talk, but the idea was stuck in my head on the bus. I hope you'll forgive me, RV.
RV is a pooh-dropping, one degree from agro - hopping (9)
AK — 26 May at 10:32AM
Sorry, that was me.
JD — 26 May at 11:04AM
Here are mine, although I suspect there is no great difference between the vips and the gps.
GP's:
KA - Roundabout near Keith
KU - Broken Ark? Glue it.
CP- Detonate! Proceed Boy.
AS -Brady maid bounds
PA - Left Master's course
VIP's
KA - Comic villain captures loveless other.
KU - Macca, Reg, Luke in the outback
PA.- Carry hallowed links.
CP - Banks receives decoration and heart of tempter
AS - Unfortunately, Grace lisps in Territory.
RK — 26 May at 12:00PM
My 10:
PA-GP: Ship's left a month beside a coastal town
PA-VIP: University went after Op Art designed by Klimt's predecessor, mostly
CP-GP: Firm body peer developed
CP-VIP: Importing drug (dope), Corby is busted
KU-GP: King introduced a gruel mixture
KU-VIP: Vessel tossed back over swell, losing bulkhead
AS-GP: Bounds after girl in the looking-glass
AS-VIP: South Park gang son follows, a cause of head scratching?
KA-GP: Take in her landscape
KA-VIP: Two cards, neither wild
RV — 26 May at 12:31PM
@AK, I'm sure I won't be offended but I need some help cracking your clue. And rest assured my AK reference was a complete accident although I am glad DC picked up unintended non weapon AK reference. My last 2 clues;
KA-GP: Take in her belt
KA-VIP: Rhine flows in her shortened form.
AK — 26 May at 01:07PM
Well, RV is the def. The trash talk's just in the clue, not the answer. Hopping is quite a tenuous signpost for alternate letters, but I think rhyme maintenance necessitates it. Oh, and the punctuation's intentionally misleading. Hope that helps enough. :)
dg — 26 May at 01:47PM
PA-VIP: Football power just before the finals get to number one.
AS-VIP: Grunge chick in chains breaks free!
dg — 26 May at 02:22PM
PA-GP: Left a month in the middle.
PA-VIP: Football power just before the finals gets to number one.
AS-GP: A pest appears suddenly.
AS-VIP: Grunge chick in chains breaks free?!
KA-GP: A female heir taken cruelly.
KA-VIP: Real-life location of Emerald City and Emerald Isle found in article?
CP-GP: Half-cooked berry pie - dry without the central ingredients.
CP-VIP: Breakthrough treatment for baby, previously tense and crying?
KU-GP: Lastly, thank you all cluing here for DA.
KU-VIP: Bump in the night returned without initiating bad dreams.
dg — 26 May at 02:25PM
Slight revision:
PA-VIP: Football power just before the finals gets to first.
DA — 26 May at 02:33PM
Thanks dg - doing a quick glance, as well as your own complete list, I can see that SK, JD, DC, RK, AK have all filed in full.
As a new player, one wheel may not be hip to the protocol. But for anyone unsure, just to be kind, a full file of your best entries near to deadline is REALLY appreciated from the judging POV. Cheers.
And thanks too for some consistent gold all week. Look forward to the Ghanalysis.
DC — 26 May at 02:45PM
Don't you have an extraneous 'Y' turn up in your CP-GP, dg? Didn't spot that the first time.
RM formerly known as Rupert — 26 May at 02:50PM
Sorry I'm late to the party. Work has been getting in the way of important stuff, again, hence an incomplete list.
Name change is in preparation for DC's proposed storm using initials.
I've searched the page to avoid re-using anyone else's ideas. Apologies if I tread on any toes with these.
PA-GP: Sugar, put to a blender.
CP-GP: Confused by cop re: Doe.
KU-GP: Knut oddly brews lager.
AS-GP: An insect's quiet hoops.
KA-GP: Inker upset about two articles.
CP-VIP: Buffalo Bill eats Hamburger's upper pie crust
KU-VIP: Bless swelling in Noah's boat, capsised.
DA — 26 May at 03:01PM
Thanks for highlighting DC's initial idea, RM (the Dabbler Formerly Known As). There's real wham-bam potential in the monogram tack. Let me simmer it.
Mauve — 26 May at 03:22PM
PA-VIP: A teapots guru rejects english breakfast
PA-GP: Left goldrush with a settlement
CP-VIP: Bert nearly enclosed bordering yard
CP-GP: Proceed by oxygen circulation
KU-VIP: Ms Knightley heartlessly traps drunken lug
KU-GP: Exotic ark glue here
AS-VIP: Aligns prices around central setting
AS-GP: Weird space-girls in outback town!
KA-VIP: Duchess of Cambridge nearly gets her fine head decapitated.
KA-GP: Reheat ink out here
Boniface — 26 May at 03:59PM
My final submissions, some tweaks:
PA - GP: Grandfather, for one, respected Aboriginal leader
PA - VIP: First person to leave Shakespearean heroine for noble
CP - GP: Pigeon noise: broken, dry beep
CP - VIP: Shy about awkward probe by journalist
KU - GP: Skull skinned by dodgy gear
KU - VIP: Skinhead German on stage?
AS - GP: Evil intention to oust leader emerges suddenly
AS - VIP: Snake admitting multiple nuisance calls?
KA - GP: Some freak at her inexperience
KA - VIP: Man ventures into Tarkine wilderness
AK — 26 May at 04:12PM
DC: I think dg's clue is half each of cooked and berry, and pie and dry without their central ingredients.
LR — 26 May at 04:25PM
Arvo all! Here are mine:
AS-GP: Gore cools on polar cap calls
AS-VIP: Fictional follower of rabbit seasons?
CP-GP: Company probe wrecked comedy's second half
CP-VIP: Rebooted my PC - untrademarked, sadly
PA - GP: Wine month - onto third glass
PA- VIP: Unplanned stop at Ugaru?
KA - GP: Odd Kraut-rock herein...
KA - VIP: Bakery essentials: wear hairnet inside
KU - GP: UK reverts to regal tyranny
KU - VIP: Gruel served during Blackjack?
SK — 26 May at 04:46PM
AK, that's how how I read dg's clue...but the half a berry doesn't quite work...3/5? Alternatively if it's the middle out of all 3 words there is a surplus "Y". Are we missing something dg?
RV — 26 May at 05:08PM
Here are my 10.
PA-GP: Danish director in a Trop retrospective.
PA-VIP: Heard to use past argot awkwardly.
CP-GP: Firm obeyed order, embracing PR spin.
CP-VIP: Sunless cops obey underground.
KU-GP: Ark glue came unstuck.
KU-VIP: Without hesitation PNG bird changed gear.
AS-GP: Pissing clear fluid.
AS-VIP: Special outcalls.
KA-GP: Take in her belt
KA-VIP: Rhine flows in her shortened form.
dg — 26 May at 06:26PM
No misreading there. Im sure Ive seen this kind of thing before. Half of 5 is 2.5 which as an integer would be 2 OR 3 (letters). And in real life many would be happy to call 6.32 half past six.
Mr X — 26 May at 06:49PM
Here goes:
PA GP: Left a month in confinement
PA VIP: Unclosed door holds a golden windstorm
CP GP: Shy about a clumsy probe by a journo
CP VIP: Mutilated corpse! Body with its bottom removed contained drug.
KU GP: Spooner's flesh-eating undead nurse
KU VIP: Regular experimentation turns a river into potassium
AS GP: Possibly seen in a Wonderland Bouncy Castle ?
AS VIP (definition included): Snake-eating insects surround south central town
KA GP: Look at her in every heart
KA VIP Take heroin, collapse and lose oxygen.
DA — 27 May at 10:16AM
Fair cop, Kaz. I did promise. Without looking at other GPs already filed, here's my stab:
PA: Feeble-sounding thanks interrupted by noble
CP: Business probe organised by journalist at day's end
KU: Britain repulsed by regal shenanigans
AS: Sale's pricing adjusted
KA: OK (rather fine) once beginners quit